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...Just provide C+C. - C.Wolf

November 29th, 2010, 7:10 pm

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Reply Celestial_Wolf, November 29th, 2010, 6:58 pm

Some things to say first. (1) Final version will have clothes. I haven't done them yet since I'm still trying to get the design right before designing them.

(2) Try to be serious, I know it's Renamon, a female one at that. But just give constructive criticism on how to improve the base design, okay?

Also, mention must go to DarkJosh as I used parts of his improved renamon sheet as inspiration and starting points for this.

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User's Comments:

Reply Blitzn'Burst, November 29th, 2010, 7:24 pm

the face seems squished

Reply Yamataro, November 29th, 2010, 7:27 pm

NEED MOAR BUUBS~!
*Smacked*
Face doesn't look right...
Can barely see 'ears'
Hair looks odd on a Renamon...
And right leg (Her left) Looks a little F'd up.

Reply KK Awesomesauce, November 29th, 2010, 7:28 pm

This thing is okie McSmokie skittly doo.

Reply Afroman17, November 29th, 2010, 8:46 pm

Rather the repeat whats already been said.. the tail could go without the black outline.

Reply Mix, November 29th, 2010, 9:33 pm

I want to Switch to Progessive aswell.

Reply Risky2k, November 30th, 2010, 1:43 am

Risky's C+C Part 1. You should remove the black outline you used on the tail and the legs. If your going to use it, you need to use it where it is needed e.g the places the sun dosn't get too. That would mean, the back of the head, the bottom/back of the tail and the back of the sprite & maybe the some parts of the legs. The shading on the head makes no sense. give it a lightsource. The breasts look oddly shaped, take alook at the naked base's of the female chars. Im sure it will show you how to make natural looking breasts.

Reply Risky2k, November 30th, 2010, 2:27 am

Risky's C+C Part 2. Lol sorry but i had to make 2 parts because my PSP limits me to how much text i can right in one box. Anyway, the right leg (Computer view) gets really skinny near the bottom. try Making it abit bigger. Why does one foot have paws, when the other one dosn't? The ears look to small, but correct me if im wrong, in thinking the are ears, because the kindb look like horns.

Reply KK Awesomesauce, November 30th, 2010, 6:23 pm

>Part 1

>Part 1

Reply Risky2k, December 3rd, 2010, 12:08 pm

^ thanks. Edited.

Reply Jesus izard (Guest), December 13th, 2010, 6:24 pm

Looks like a pile of steaming yellow shit



You guys need to learn to stop using Sonic style, it makes everything look primitive and it holds you back.
Be more adventurous.

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