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New yama?-Yamataro

January 30th, 2009, 10:19 pm

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Reply Yamataro, January 30th, 2009, 10:21 pm

This is a major overhaul of Yamataro's old look. I've kept the old one long enough. C+C please!

Reply hub12, January 30th, 2009, 10:22 pm

Nice. A lil advice, are you going to permanently keep his eyes bloodshot?

Reply Yamataro, January 30th, 2009, 10:35 pm

Actually they are not blood shot. Yamataro's a half demon. (Like every other sprite author. -_-;) Anyway his eyes are how you can tell. They are his Demon trait, He has a power with them I haven't yet shown. :3

Reply CursedBluto, January 30th, 2009, 11:17 pm

Think you could use something aside from default red for the (not so)whites of his eyes?

Reply Yamataro, January 30th, 2009, 11:25 pm

Yeah... I just realized that... When I was a noob that was the color I used. I'll fix it. Edit: Fixed! Better?
Edit2: I mean does it look better?

Reply dark_knight, January 31st, 2009, 12:25 am

I'd shade in the eyes, looks not so great, body looks fucking weird, I'd take a shadow pose, remove the arms, to make a base sprite, then add new, already made arms.
also add shades, one more to the black, and at least 2 more to the purple.
change the shape of the eyes too.
k.

Reply Guest, January 31st, 2009, 1:25 am

I aggree with scratchy rite thar, at the moment his legs look like raptor legs.

And instead of the whole eye why not just make the iris red?

Ren

Reply Chaos 0 (Guest), January 31st, 2009, 7:30 am

The left arm just looks weird. Who would stick their arm out like that in a casual pose? And don't use default red for the eyes, try editing the red so it will look better.

Other than that, Sweet.

Reply true mercha, January 31st, 2009, 8:39 am

what scratch said

Reply Yamataro, January 31st, 2009, 10:35 am

Ok. Got it. Major editing to the major edit. Gotcha.

Reply Felix Wind, January 31st, 2009, 3:54 pm

Well..
I think you should make the pants go down even a tiny bit more, and lighten the shading a bit more so it's more visible.

Hmm... Other than that and the hand thing for what Chaos 0 said, I see no problems..

EDIT: Are there anymore author spaces? ._.

Reply true mercha, February 1st, 2009, 7:56 am

FW:yes there is

Reply Takanuva6493, January 30th, 2010, 12:28 am

Love the red eyes.

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