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Daitaro/ 2nd try -Yamataro

March 28th, 2009, 10:44 pm

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Reply Yamataro, March 28th, 2009, 10:45 pm

Remember to look at leah's before mine. Anyway, vote and C+c?
My favs are 3 and 4 but it's hard to choose... x3

Reply Yamataro, March 28th, 2009, 11:12 pm

I want that Deliquent look. I mean, He's the kid of an funny random serious demon and a Military-raised bipolar female... I think this is the best possible future for a kid like that.

Reply RenTech, March 28th, 2009, 11:43 pm

If it's a girl it looks like a stereotypical lesbian :P
But if your goin for the delinquent look #2

Reply K I R A, March 29th, 2009, 12:15 am

I was going to say 1, but after hearing about the military thing, I'm gonna go with 2 for my vote. The fringe-esque thing on 3 and 4 looks plain ugly. And again, the shading is off, but you fixed the color problem on the pants, so that's a plus.

And about the shading; it contradicts itself. The head says that the light source is coming from in front of him, while the jacket begs to differ, and says it's coming from behind him. And the pants need to be reshaded to show an actual source.

Also, considering you said 3/4 were your favorites, and you really want him to have a fringe, try to make it look more natural. It looks like it's just sticking out of his head, all stiff and such.

Reply Elda142, March 29th, 2009, 7:29 am


Reply Yamataro, March 29th, 2009, 8:36 am

So 2?

Reply Dark Dragon X80, March 29th, 2009, 1:02 pm

1 and 2.
Purple thing doesn't look like it's attached to his head for some reason, probably the shading.

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