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May 23rd, 2009, 8:34 pm

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Reply FlyingMonkey, May 23rd, 2009, 8:53 pm

I think the left arm is too long. Sides that, looks great.

Reply Ryderlol, May 23rd, 2009, 9:00 pm

He looks fat, fat mobian on the lose ;-;

Reply Dark Dragon X80, May 23rd, 2009, 9:20 pm

Yeah, arm looks weird.
But otherwise, kool.

Reply Evilagram, May 24th, 2009, 12:05 am

>acception

That's not a word. I can understand a typo, but you're in friggen Firefox (YOU HAD BETTER BE *eyes burn with fury*) how can you make a mistake like that?

Don't discourage people from spriting! Tell them what they did wrong so they can get better! I'd say that this piece is a sign that they probably draw like this in real life: http://images.encyclopediadramatica.com/images/7/77/SchuComicPage27.jpg

To go into actual critique, stop pillow shading, learn to draw. There is really not much more to say than that. Learn HUMAN, not hedgehog, especially not sonic type hedgehog, anatomy. EVERYTHING IS BASED ON HUMAN ANATOMY, SO IF YOU KNOW THAT, YOU CAN DO ANYTHING.

EDIT: Also, uninstall photoshop or any fancy photo manipulation or painting programs you have. You're making sprites, you don't need them. On a technical level, you should learn how to actually draw before using fancy programs to make your stuff look less sucky.

Reply true mercha, May 24th, 2009, 1:04 am

>coks

That's not a word. i can understand a typo, but your in frikken morning wood(YOU HAD BETTER BE *eyes burn with fury*) how can you make a mistake like that

Don't discourage people abount boners! Tell them what they did wrong so they can get better! I'd say that this piece is a sign that they probably boner over stuff like this in real life: http://images.encyclopediadramatica.com/images/7/77/SchuComicPage27.jpg

To go into actual critique, stop pillow shading, learn to hurrrr. There is really not much more to say than that. Learn HUMAN,hurr, especially not sonic type hurrr, anatomy. EVERYTHING huuuuuurr ANATOMY, SO IF YOU KNOW THAT, YOU hurrrrrrrrr ANYTHING.

fixed that for you

Reply Zmanwarrior, May 24th, 2009, 1:13 am

*Rolls eyes*

Reply Evilagram, May 24th, 2009, 1:17 am

"HURR DURR, I HATE YOU HURR, GO AWAY, DURRRRRRR, I'M GONNA REWRITE YOUR POST IN A RETARDED WAY TO SHOW THAT I CAN STAND UP TO THE BIG BAD GUY, DURRHURR"

Seriously, are you 11 or what? If you have a problem with me, then don't voice it in such a . . . frankly pathetic, way.

Reply true mercha, May 24th, 2009, 1:27 am

no

but that was fun

its fun making big bad troll angry

Reply Evilagram, May 24th, 2009, 1:37 am

Do I sound angry to you?

Also, in what way am I a troll? Do you even know what a troll is? Come on kid, this isn't multi-variable calculus.

Reply true mercha, May 24th, 2009, 1:45 am

lemons mostly

Reply Zmanwarrior, May 24th, 2009, 10:50 am

Mercha: Shut up. Stop trying to start a flame war. If you do, then I'm erasing the whole damn thing. If you don't like Evilagram, then bitch about it somewhere else and stop spamming the comment space. He's doing exactly what he supposed to be doing here; critiquing sprites.

Evilagram: Stop responding to Mercha. You're only giving him what he wants. Let him get his last bit of spam in so that he's satisfied and we can all merrily go back to commenting on the sprite.

Jesus Lizard: Stop posting those idiotic sprite-hate comments. Stop acting like a prick and give good advice, "don't ever make a custom sprite again" is not good advice.

Everyone else: Same rules apply to you all. I'm getting a little pissed off with all of this spam appearing on the comment space, and if no one else is going to do anything about it, then I will.

And one more thing.

Noland: For god's sake get back on this comic and start enforcing those rules that you yourself created.

Reply ForteTh, May 26th, 2009, 3:41 am

Apart from the left arm everything else looks fine to me.

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