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~Cardinal S.L~

May 26th, 2009, 7:16 pm

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Reply Reds, May 26th, 2009, 7:42 pm

Pretty good SL, you're improving. Just a few bits of crit.

I think the pants could be more defind The shading on them doesn't merge with the shading on the hoodie.

The arms seem too long, it also looks like Scratch's old sprite, but that's just me.

Hate the hands. The left head looks alright, but the right head looks pillowed.

The main problem for me is that the shading doesn't merge together.

Reply Evilagram, May 26th, 2009, 11:12 pm

The pose looks stiff. Liven it up a bit. Do you ever stand like that? Put some character into it!

The hair doesn't really look like a cardinal's. Step off the sonic bases. They're holding you back.

The shading has no real rhyme or rythm to it. Figure out how stuff looks under light. It's all about the direction of the light.

Reply Elda142, May 27th, 2009, 7:21 am

Bird Flu.

Reply Zmanwarrior, May 30th, 2009, 1:28 pm

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Reply XinTrayce, May 30th, 2009, 10:29 pm

The preportions on this are really bad dude.

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