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June 9th, 2009, 1:45 am

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Reply AnXjak, June 9th, 2009, 2:24 am

He's looking back on something...I wonder what it is o3o

also, the pants are almost the same colour as the skin lol.

Otherwise, Great 8D

Reply Evial Agarihem, June 9th, 2009, 7:46 am

*clap clap clap*

Nice job.

I was expecting you to at least mess up the weight, but you even got that right.

The palette is passable, could use some dynamic. You kept the values disctinct on the pants and hands, so they don't blend together. Perhaps you could be a bit darker on that thumb on the left hand.

On another note, you need to reuse colors more. I did a quick scan of the palette and found 32 colors, a lot of them having barely any variation. I found 3 shades of white, including the background. The biggest offender is the blacks which have a really big swatch on the palette with barely any variation.

The right hand is supposed to be bent from what I can see, but you could convey the bend better. As is it looks like the right hand is shorter.

Some areas of the outline are inconsistent. You leave a pixel on the corner when the line width is one pixel.

The left arm appears to sprout out of the neck. Get rid of a tiny bit of outline around the shoulder area, to show that it's actually connected to the shoulder.

The head is really the worst looking section of the sprite. The angle which the head points isn't very clear. At first glance it appeared to be gazing downwards. Then I looked again and saw the goofiest look off to the side, with wide eyes and no real emotion. That just killed the mood of the whole thing for me. You did the rest of the sprite, you can make a head.

By the way, it's physically impossible to turn your head that far. Try it. You can't get past your shoulder.

Reply Afroman17, June 9th, 2009, 8:51 am

if your gonna go this far why even throw a sonic head on there....and backwards....?

Reply Evial Agarihem, June 9th, 2009, 10:30 am

AAAAND here is a picture for all those who noticed the weirdly angled head.

http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/416986/temp/LinTeachesAnatomy

Reply Reds, June 9th, 2009, 12:43 pm

I would say "good job". But I'm afraid I wouldn't even classify this as good, bodies are easy to sprite. Learn to do a head, srsly.

If you really want to go custom you should atleast do your head custom.

Other then that, I am digging the pants shading.

Reply Zmanwarrior, June 9th, 2009, 1:14 pm

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Reply Evial Agarihem, June 9th, 2009, 1:45 pm

And lemme guess, nobody's gonna yell at Reds? Right? Hahaha!

Reply true mercha, June 9th, 2009, 2:15 pm

of course not

reds has pokemon avatar


hurrr

Reply Evial Agarihem, June 9th, 2009, 7:48 pm

My name is Duke Nukem - and I'm coming to get the rest of you alien bastards!

Reply true mercha, June 10th, 2009, 2:08 am

my name is El Fuerte


and i will butt slam spam you

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