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yes its me unfinished

August 7th, 2009, 11:45 pm

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Reply abdie the hedgehog, August 7th, 2009, 11:45 pm

yes im back tell me what you think

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Reply Eval Argahm, August 7th, 2009, 11:56 pm

It's a recolor with stolen shit from everywhere. I think it's ugly.

Reply NoHeroesLeftInMan, August 7th, 2009, 11:58 pm


Reply abdie the hedgehog, August 7th, 2009, 11:59 pm

whats stolen i made stuff on there

Reply Eval Argahm, August 8th, 2009, 12:16 am

Like those legs, ever so blatantly ripped off Jump.

Also, stop using the Chiller font. I actually liked that font face.

Reply Nix, August 8th, 2009, 12:27 am

The belt buckle, I'm assuming that's what it is, looks deformed and needs much better shading, since it stands out badly with the sprites.

If there are any shading on the pants, I really cant see that and you need to fix it. And not just the pants, there's some bad shading in several parts. Several spikes, that canon (Because it looks 8-bit), and a bunch of the kicks and punches.

The blurs on several of the punches, and kicks are really bad, you need to just get rid of those or find a much better way to custom blur.

If the yellow sprites are super sprites, yellow is an overused super color. Just saying.
Though going super is pretty overused too. >_>

The last energy bolt, needs work. It pretty much just looks like a bunch of different shades of blue blobbed together.

Empty space is not empty space if you have a bunch of those sprites beating up words. .3.

There might be more, but I dunno.

If you fix those things, it might be an okay sprite. Looks wise if not originality wise.

Edit: Telling people that you'll kill them, especially when you mispell kill, makes them want to steal it just because they can and know you can't actually kill them.

Reply XP_Lulz, August 8th, 2009, 12:52 am

To me.. ..It looks deformed. :\

Reply RenTech, August 8th, 2009, 5:26 am

What in the name of god is wrong with the super sprites .-.

Also, super forms are for girls/fags who aren't capable of fighting for themselves.

Reply Eternalstorm Blade, August 8th, 2009, 7:34 am

it looks deformed and mutetated these sprites needs some serious re-doing.

Reply Neociz, August 8th, 2009, 11:13 am

Hyper form, why.

Reply ragethefox, August 8th, 2009, 1:25 pm

This looks worse than my sprites back in 2008 before September.

Reply Reds, August 8th, 2009, 2:53 pm

It's not that bad, you know. :/

Asides from the shading and the deformity on poses. He's done a better job then what I've seen from some other people.

The super sprites look alright, actually. Except for some weird hand poses.

All this needs is some touchups on the legs and poses, shading and definitions and it could be an okay sheet.

@J.L: No, we shouldn't kick him out, just because he isn't that good. It's called "The Spriters Showcase", not the "ONLY PROS SPRITES SHOWCASE PLS".

Reply Chaosmark101, August 8th, 2009, 4:37 pm

just one thing the blast at the bottom is fail.
really though switch it with something else abdie.

Reply Zmanwarrior, August 8th, 2009, 8:44 pm

Needs a more fleshed out torso. It looks like he his arms are sprouting from a pole or something.

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