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December 25th, 2009, 2:07 pm

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Reply FlyingMonkey, December 25th, 2009, 3:57 pm

Your Line art is ok, the real problem though is the shading. Lots of spots seem to be pillowed and I can't find a light source.

If you were trying to make the pose in the image. (Which I assume you were.) You've got a few things to fix.

First off the entire position of the nose is wrong. The nostrils need to be moved to closer match the proper angle. Also his shoes need a new palette. The orange butt looking thing needs a more spherical shape as well.

So besides palette and a few minor things, good job. ;)

Reply kingsamurai, December 25th, 2009, 4:11 pm

above

Reply amerite aka anal_virus (Guest), December 25th, 2009, 5:25 pm

request goku-hog ssj4 sheet include the dragon fist please dont kill me i r noob i r s0f+

Reply Tanokki, December 25th, 2009, 5:59 pm

What Flying Monkey said. Also, In my opinion, it also reminds me of Ritz style.

Reply Guest, February 13th, 2010, 11:06 am

hands=bad,very bad

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