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January 22nd, 2010, 8:57 am

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Reply Zmanwarrior, January 22nd, 2010, 12:42 pm

Kindly leave Fuck, spelled wrong or not, out of the title next time.

We're not RitM.

Anyways, like with Mutsumi, the Hair spikes out awkwardly, especially the top left purple spike. His collar juts out on the right, but not on the left. His jacket suddenly ends where his pants begins, exactly, which isn't really natural looking. His left leg is thicker than his right, to much so just to be the one that is closer to the viewer. His shoes are triangular, and his pants seem to wrap very tightly around them. Lastly,his arm shoots straight out from a weird point, making it look like one shoulder is lower than the other.

Reply Yamataro, January 22nd, 2010, 12:46 pm

Lol. I knew someone was "screwing" with me. Fine. It was a joke. Also, Might want to check page.. 48, 119, 414. There maybe more but those are the most apparent.

Reply Zmanwarrior, January 22nd, 2010, 12:51 pm

Okey dokey, and edited in crit in that last comment.

Reply Yamataro, January 22nd, 2010, 1:02 pm

Points taken. I felt good when I was done with him, though I knew of some of the flaws pointed out. The colar, the hair, the leg are all things I knew. The shoulder through me off. I feel a little embarassed at that mistake. The shoes are always Triangular to one degree or another. Consider it a Yamataro Exculsive property. As for the Jacket, It actually is natural. At least here in Texas. The Jacket stops right after the "Rim" of the pants. His pants actually begin where the belt does.(That Brown thing is a belt btw...) And the Pants... How do you know that he fat legs? lol. No. I get where you are getting at. All these posts though are making me feel like an update whore. ;-; So I'll work on him later and have it up on monday or something. Give you guys a bit of a break from ole Yama.

Also, 119 still says shit. Is that allowed? XD

Reply Zmanwarrior, January 22nd, 2010, 1:08 pm

Meh, it was Mercha. In fact, three out of five (FFFFUUU included) were Mercha.

Shit is... okay. Just don't make a habit out of using it.

Reply Yamataro, January 22nd, 2010, 1:12 pm

Oh please.. When have ..I... ever.... oh.... shit....

Reply abdie the hedgehog, January 22nd, 2010, 8:51 pm

yama this is awsome (D

Reply .:SMF:., January 23rd, 2010, 11:25 am

One legs bigger than the other, he's too tall, his feet are dispositioned, His jacket collar is wtf, and his head is just...what?

Shall I go on?

Reply torchthewolf, January 23rd, 2010, 12:40 pm

Could Rush & I get some perms please we would really like to post.

Reply Zmanwarrior, January 23rd, 2010, 3:05 pm

Already done.

Reply torchthewolf, January 23rd, 2010, 7:12 pm

Alright awesome!

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