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January 25th, 2010, 11:08 pm

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Reply genx0, January 25th, 2010, 11:23 pm

Eh its alright but It still needs work, the shading is inconsistant it jumps from dark to bright back to dark, when you shade you want 1 solid transition

the anatomy of what i might be seems off too, the legs and the torso should match each other in length.

Reply Zmanwarrior, January 25th, 2010, 11:25 pm

Torso is shaped like a mutated egg. Pants don't connec the way they should, ergo it should be more of a straight line and not a hump where they meet the shirt. The pants also seem to cuff through the shoes, and unless they're supposed to have a camouflage pattern, then the shading is way too scattered, even for baggy pants.

Reply Mist th, January 26th, 2010, 12:14 am

thanks for the C+C I'm gonna go try to fix that.
EDIT: Done.

Reply FlyingMonkey, January 26th, 2010, 9:15 am

It's sloppy. The shading, the line art, everything!
I would scrap this and try it over.

It's a good effort, but it just came out really bad.

Reply Mist th, January 26th, 2010, 7:06 pm

K I'll take another crack at it.

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