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Leonardo - Yamataro

January 27th, 2010, 2:44 pm

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Reply Comik Radd, January 27th, 2010, 3:03 pm

The quills look flat, like he just got raped by the wind one way, then the other.

The hands are just as they would be on the massive hands sheet.

Weird thing in the middle of the dude's chest.

Some weird red thing on the right shoe. A red that refuses to blend.

The hell is that gray thing on his abdomen?

Ears seem pointy and unnatural.

Pallet. I hate it, personally. Too damned bright. Not really a big deal, more of a personal preference.

Pants. Alright, but could be better. Needs more focus on... you know. What SL said.

Several different light sources.


Definitely not your best work, man.

Reply Yamataro, January 27th, 2010, 3:07 pm

Sigh. Having fun SL?
So, tone down the yellow cause apparently Yellow is a color everyone hates. Are you shading blind? The only thing of shading would possibly be the shoes. And part of the stomach. Random pixel fail there. Anything else?
@ Comic: Fair enough. I knew the yellow was definitely gonna drag it down. There's just no actual yellow characters so I was trying something new.

Reply Comik Radd, January 27th, 2010, 3:10 pm

Yeah. All of what I posted. Get to that. Chop chop.

Reply Yamataro, January 27th, 2010, 3:12 pm

I responded to yours. In my last comment.

Reply Afroman17, January 27th, 2010, 3:39 pm

"...like we all do" the hands have a lot of contrast while everything else feels lacking...

Reply ::ZASHU::, January 27th, 2010, 3:48 pm

dis is sexy

Reply Comik Radd, January 27th, 2010, 3:58 pm

You didn't really respond to my entire post.

And once again. Get to it. Chop chop.

Reply FlyingMonkey, January 27th, 2010, 4:39 pm

Ya'know Yamz as soon as I saw the thumbnail I knew it was you. Your sprites have a unique look to them! :)

The outline color on the gloves should have less contrast so that it goes with the shading method you used for the rest of the body. Also the yellow needs a greater level of contrast.

Reply Yamataro, January 27th, 2010, 4:53 pm

@ SL: I can take Critique. I just still have no respect for you.
@ Afro: K I'll see on fixing that.
@Zashu: The sprite or the text?
@ comic: I will.
@ FM: Really? You can tell?
Alright, I'l see what I can do. Just wanting to try and see if I was getting better or not.

Reply Haru_The_Angel, January 27th, 2010, 5:23 pm

@Comik: That "weird thing on his chest" appears to be a necklace.

@Sprite: Hands need less contrast, rest needs more contrast, and the spines/fringe look like Leo spends 5 hours a day gelling it.
I shouldn't really say much though, I doubt I could do much better XD

All in all, not your best, but still ok.
I also agree with FM, they do have that uniqueness that I can't quite describe.

Reply Neociz, January 27th, 2010, 8:40 pm

Shhhhhh, just ignore the superior(*COUGH*) Scuze me.

Reply Zmanwarrior, January 27th, 2010, 11:08 pm

Go ahead, SL. Go ahead and start up an argument. You'll find yourself locked out faster than you can blink.

Keep your nose out of this, Neo, or you'll get locked out as well

Yama, I know you don't like SL, but kindly leave the animosity off of the Showcase. Alright? His first post was perfectly fine and now I'm threatening him because you pissed him off. I expected more mature behavior from you.

And Emiya, stop encouraging them.

As for the sprite, what the above posters pointed out, plus his shoes are just recolors of Shadows' if that hasn't been pointed out already.

Reply Yamataro, January 28th, 2010, 8:22 am

Yeah. I'm sorry. I wasn't meaning to snap. Was in a bad mood yesterday. And appearently the computer I was one had different settings. Upon getting on this comp I realized WHY it was so blinding a yellow. It was supposed to be darker and instead the computer screen was bad. I'm sorry.

Reply Zmanwarrior, January 28th, 2010, 4:34 pm

Well, he almost literally asked for it.

Shadow Lugia has been commentbanned for jackassery until further notice. Not a troll indeed.

Reply Neociz, January 28th, 2010, 5:46 pm

Hey, it's quiet in here.

Reply cqclegoman, January 28th, 2010, 7:52 pm

He ISN'T a troll, Zman. There's just a bit of a blood feud with Yama and him.

Reply Zmanwarrior, January 28th, 2010, 8:36 pm

Cman, I issued him a warning and he chose not only to ignore it but to outright mock it. In an allcaps post no less.

At least Yama apologized for his behavior, while SL persisted to act like the troll he says he isn't. So banned he remains until further notice. If he wants back in he'll have to contact me and we'll talk it over, but until then its end of story.

Reply Khuroda, February 2nd, 2010, 2:34 pm

crazy shit bro

Reply x the wolf (Guest), February 13th, 2010, 9:39 am

the guy:cool
the clothes:bad as shit

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