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Yama's Sheet (WIP)~Yamataro

March 4th, 2010, 1:29 pm

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Reply FlyingMonkey, March 4th, 2010, 1:40 pm

Looking good Yams!
As far as the walking pose, i think the arms are too long. If you walk, there is no way your hands are going to be level with your feet. Remember, the hands always rest on the upper thigh. I think the hand needs to be where his red cuffs are.
Also idle pose A's left hand is in about the right place. However, it looks like a claw. Adjust the length of the left arm in idle pose C. And copy paste it on pose A.
Remember, consistency lays in the most minute details.

Reply Angel the Tenric, March 4th, 2010, 3:35 pm

Everything's good, but Monkey's right, the arms are a tad too long

Try moving the bottom of the arm 1 pixel up and 1 pixel to the left

Reply Whip the Rabbit, March 4th, 2010, 4:34 pm

Guys, the only reason his arm look long is because of the cuff around his(Nonexsistant, may I add) neck. if you look properly, you'll notice that it's a mixture of the background foot being in the air and the awkward cuff. the leg that the arm is coordinated to shows that the arm is correctly positioned.
And I took a sonic sprite and put it over this one to see what had been edited. There weren't any.
And Yama, make a new head for the walking pose, it looks weird.
and his pants shrunk a bit in the walking pose.

Reply Yamataro, March 4th, 2010, 5:00 pm

@ whip: Ah.. but there are some edits, He's taller. I agree with FM and whip though.
As for a new head...
Ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff-k.

Reply Whip the Rabbit, March 4th, 2010, 6:10 pm

I assumed that was the cuff, my bad.
and is that a FFFFFFFFFFF-ok

Reply Yamataro, March 4th, 2010, 6:14 pm


Reply FlyingMonkey, March 4th, 2010, 7:21 pm

"the leg that the arm is coordinated to shows that the arm is correctly positioned."
Um, no.
His right hand is below the nee of his right leg. You could only achieve that if your Mr. Fantastic.
Go ahead and try to get your hand that cant without bending over.

Reply Khuroda, March 5th, 2010, 8:05 am

You didn't make the slightly but not completely baggy pants Rush. Neroe did it like 2 years ago, and I'm sure people did it before him.

Reply WolfieBoy, March 5th, 2010, 12:14 pm

i love it, but, the red shirt sticks out too much and it looks like he has breast.flat chest him?

Reply Yamataro, March 5th, 2010, 12:47 pm

It's not breast. It's muscle. There's no defining line showing breasts.

Reply Khuroda, March 5th, 2010, 7:55 pm


Reply Yamataro, March 6th, 2010, 12:32 am

Wwww Tht's swt.
Cl str br.

Reply Khuroda, March 6th, 2010, 9:21 am

I got my rations on vowels for today

Reply Mist the Moonhunter, March 6th, 2010, 7:21 pm

Sleeve seems a bit to much of a square.

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