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Mario & Luigi WIP ~ FM

April 27th, 2010, 7:45 pm

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Reply FlyingMonkeh, April 27th, 2010, 7:48 pm

All righty then. So, here I have made a pose of both Mario and Luigi.

What I need from you is critique. I want to make these as good as possible since I plan on making a whole bunch of sheets in this style.

Below is a list of all the sheets I plan on making this year.


Super Mario World Project!

Main Characters!

Mario - CA-
Luigi - CA-
Wario -
Waluigi -
Peach -
Daisy -
Rosalina -
Bowser -
Bowser Jr. -
Yoshi -
Fawful -
Midbus -
Baby Mario -
Baby Luigi -
DK -
Birdo -
E. Gadd -
Toad -
Toadette -
Toadsworth -
Koopalings -
Petey -
Diddy -


Enemies!

Blooper -
Bomb-om -
Boo -
Bullet Bill -
Chain Chmp -
Cheep Chp -
Dry Bones -
Goomba -
Hmmr bros. -
Kamek -
King Boo -
Koopa -
Lakitu -
Piranha -
Pokey -
Shy Guy -
Thwomp -
Spinies -

Items!

Mushrooms -
Flowers -
Stars -
Coins -
Pipes -
Blocks -


Thank you all for your opinions in advance!

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Reply FlyingMonkey, April 27th, 2010, 8:04 pm

Thanks Jay!

One of the main things that has been bothering me is Mario's face.
Something just seems off about it to me.
Any ideas?

Reply BreakerLOLZ, April 27th, 2010, 8:30 pm

I can't help but feel that either Mario's head is too big or his body isn't wide enough.

Reply Mist the Moonhunter, April 28th, 2010, 3:45 am

Luigi's proportions are wrong.
Or marios are.
His arms are to long.
Or there to short.
D=
Also mario should be fatter.
Unless your going for a more modern Mario.

Reply cqclegoman, April 28th, 2010, 6:59 am

MARIO SHOULD BE NICE PLUMP AN' FAT.

I love Luigi though <3

Reply Caseyisatschoolderp (Guest), April 28th, 2010, 7:38 am

I think Mario's head is too big 030 Something about the eyes are bothering me too...

I love the color pallets though~ :3

Reply FlyingMonkey, April 28th, 2010, 8:49 am

@ Everybody : Yes I see what you all mean.
Mario does need to be more chubby, I'll be sure to fix that!

@ Mist : Luigi's proportions?
I see no problems there according to the references I used.
And his arms are not too long.
If you check out any of Luigi's images from Nintendo you'll see that he's just right.

That said. Mario should be fatter.
Though I'm not sure what you mean by "Modern Mario."
There is only one Mario I know of. :3

Anyhow, thank you all for your help!

Reply FlyingMonkey, April 28th, 2010, 8:59 am

UPDATE! Okay, I changed the shading on Mario's belly to make it feel more round.
I also used these for reference.

http://files.nintendic.com/general/mario.jpg

http://234next.files.wordpress.com/2009/11/super-mario-bros.jpg

I also tried to add a little more shape to Mario's face.
yet, I don't think it took care of the problem.

Reply Yamataro, April 28th, 2010, 1:06 pm

It's the cheek. The cheek, in proportion to the face, is rather huge. Lowering the fatness in the cheek may help. One sec...

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