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A revamp of one of my charas

June 7th, 2010, 4:15 am

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Reply coopthehedgehog, June 7th, 2010, 9:23 am

which is the new one?

Reply TheDarkman1990, June 7th, 2010, 9:32 am

The right one

Reply Marcus The Hedgehog, June 7th, 2010, 9:39 am

I think they look too much alike to tell.

Reply TheDarkman1990, June 7th, 2010, 9:46 am

Maybe because I like that design.

Reply Zephyr (Guest), June 7th, 2010, 10:56 am

Okay so, here we go/
The eye is a little small, maybe make it a little bit bigger? Also shading the eye would probably make it look better.

The shirt looks better, the tuft of fur on the chest looks better as well, I personally don't like the muzzle shading, but that's just my opinion. the ear looks backwards to me, the fringe being rounded doesn't really appeal to me, also the shading on the fringe doesn't match the rest of the shading.

Also it looks like you used the darkest colour for the whole outline, you could try to use the second and maybe even the third shade in different areas to make it look a little bit better.

Thanks for the read -Zephyr

Reply TheDarkman1990, June 7th, 2010, 11:27 am

Thanks for the critisizm.

Reply Mist the Moonhunter, June 7th, 2010, 5:07 pm

Square muzzle.

Reply Sadpanda, June 7th, 2010, 6:51 pm

Pillow shaded. Nuff said.

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