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Let the critique begin - TheDarkman1990

June 16th, 2010, 2:36 pm

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Reply metaboo, June 16th, 2010, 2:40 pm

no, the title doesnt say "all" it says "Let the critique begin - TheDarkman1990"

Reply TheDarkman1990, June 16th, 2010, 2:44 pm


Anyways wanna critique it?

Reply Bresong, June 16th, 2010, 2:45 pm


Reply metaboo, June 16th, 2010, 2:49 pm

his head needs more shading compared to the pants. What is he holding though?

Reply TheDarkman1990, June 16th, 2010, 2:51 pm

A gun. And well I am already going to change the head a bit.

Reply austionwulf, June 16th, 2010, 2:51 pm

WELL THEN. I didn't really like the hair thing in the first place....but besides that...

The shading on the hair suggest your lightsource is on the bottom right, but his clothes, and hands, and such suggest otherwise.

That's all I got.

Reply Wolfy Plz, June 16th, 2010, 4:47 pm

What Creator said...

Reply TheDarkman1990, June 17th, 2010, 12:06 am

@ Creator Not it´s not harsh.

Actually that´s the kind of critique I was looking for. And comparing your critique with my sprite, I ttly have to agree with you on it.

Thanks man.

Reply austionwulf, June 17th, 2010, 4:45 pm

I luv you Creator :3

Reply Mist the Moonhunter, June 18th, 2010, 7:40 am

Creator seems to always write in dot points these days.
I miss lighting th.

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