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Made it myself - Cman

June 21st, 2010, 4:59 pm

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Reply lern2surture, June 21st, 2010, 4:28 pm

pillow shaded hair :c

Reply cqclegoman, June 21st, 2010, 4:28 pm

It looks good sized down.

Reply Pingas260XL, June 21st, 2010, 4:35 pm

thanks for noticing. i worked hard on those sprites. hope ya'll like em.

Reply ReiKainaric, June 21st, 2010, 4:37 pm

You have no feedback from the one I made you ;~;?

Reply KK Awesomesauce, June 21st, 2010, 4:42 pm

Edit: That didnt make sense...

But good improvement.

Reply EMIYA, June 21st, 2010, 4:44 pm

Your shading is atrocious. Pick a fixed light source and stick to it. On the jean tears, I personally don't think it's a good idea. It's just too much detail for a tiny Sonic-styled sprite, so it looks kinda funny (though I guess that's just what I think). I'm also having trouble deciphering what's up with his chest. I want to say it's a shirt with blue sleeves or something, but I'm not sure. If it is a shirt, it should fall over the jeans more, otherwise it's looking like it's a tiny shirt or it's tucked in. The yellow color is too much like the color of the arms, assuming he is wearing a shirt. If that is his chest, however, what the hell is that blue stuff? And why is his chest a different color from his arms (sorry, just trying to tackle both situations here). For his fringe, I'd say let it come down more. It kinda just sticks out, but there's nothing wrong with that. It'd just look a bit more natural for his hand to be coming down.

Aside from all of that, it's alright.

Reply Rage, June 21st, 2010, 5:31 pm

lol comic 666

The only critiques I have:
Either his chest is ripped+orange shirt parts,
or that yellow part looks too much liek the skin.
Btw, if it's ripped, make it not, it's too much for a small sonic sprite.

Reply cqclegoman, June 21st, 2010, 6:01 pm

Brilliant replies. And, I'll get on that later Rei.

Can't reply right now, I gotta go. I'll be back in a couple hours and take care of it then.

Reply ShadowRobn, June 22nd, 2010, 2:06 am

...Comic 666... Jamlegend rank 1,666... Math solution was 666... This thing is haunting me.

Reply Mist the Moonhunter, June 22nd, 2010, 2:52 am

See, mine looked like shit, because mine was an example.
This is the kind of work I expect from you Cbro.(Possible nickname?)

Reply cqclegoman, June 22nd, 2010, 6:56 am

'Ight, Van..I can see what you mean in the light source. Different lighting everywhere. As for the jean tears, it was suggested by Mist and I think they look fine. The chest..like you said; it's a shirt with blue sleeves. I'll go fix the shirt so it doesn't look tucked in too, btw

The yellow is basically a ripped shirt, too. Though if it confuses people, I'll gladly remove it. The fringe..I can see where you're coming from on that. Other than the whole 'hand to be coming down' thing. Did you confuse hand with hair?

Alright, k. Also, split it up into different paragraphs next time so it's easier to read.

As for Rage, Van covered all that.

Thanks Tech.

Shadow's speaking in tongues.

Mist, don't rush next time. Thanks btw lol

Also, Cman is my nickname, Mist.

Reply FlyingMonkey, June 22nd, 2010, 9:19 am

The shading just doesn't seem consistent to me. It also looks kinda sloppy.

Reply EMIYA, June 22nd, 2010, 3:57 pm

V2 looks much better. I can understand the shirt much better now. Again, the shading is still a problem, but aside from that, I have no complaints.

Reply Afroman17, June 23rd, 2010, 2:22 am

now just fix the fox tail to not be a fox tail...

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