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My Sprite Sheet (please crit)

June 22nd, 2010, 10:54 am

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Is it any good? Took me two days with 1 sprite.
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Reply KK Awesomesauce, June 22nd, 2010, 11:05 am

some shading is a little off.
*raises hand*
i like it.

Reply Zephyr (Guest), June 22nd, 2010, 11:11 am

Oh look, baggy jeans and a jacket

Reply Yamataro, June 22nd, 2010, 11:38 am

*Goes on a rage about baggy jeans and Jacket*

Reply lern2surture, June 22nd, 2010, 11:53 am

<-- look guise i can draw furfags
k anyway:

+ jackets are cool bro

- the shading of the pant on sprite 1 and 2 aren't the same
- purple shading needs more contrast
- weird angle on his leg and hand
- hair/spinestyle is cliche
- copy-pasted heads

Reply FlyingMonkey, June 22nd, 2010, 3:50 pm

Well it's better than most I've seen.

1. The hair needs a greater contrast. You'll like it better if you fix that. As a matter of fact, contrast is needed on the entire sprite.

2. the sleeve in the idle pose on the right is strange. Start thin, and then work your way bigger around the cuffs.

3. The shading on the jeans is sloppy, and follow no true pattern. Clean it up.

4. Quills could be more loose instead of being stiff spikes. That is, unless you prefer it that way.

5. In the first sprite the right hand needs a better outline toward the right of the knuckles.

6. In the first sprite the torso is too far from the hips. Move everything but the pants one pixel too the right. I think that might fix it.

Besides that the only thing I can think of is the inconsistency between hand sizes. But since you used a battle pose for the first sprites base, and a SA pose for the second. This can be overlooked.

Good work! Looking forward to seeing more from you!

Reply KK Awesomesauce, June 22nd, 2010, 5:25 pm

ilu and your crit FM

Reply Rage, June 22nd, 2010, 7:06 pm

ohai kingsamurai nice furfaglol

And FM covered everything there is.

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