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pic head 1 or 2

July 15th, 2010, 9:45 pm

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Reply abdie the hedgehog, July 15th, 2010, 9:45 pm

pic the head 1 or 2?!?!?!??!?!

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Reply coopthehedgehog, July 15th, 2010, 11:01 pm

No offence abdie but...
Your style of spriting now..it well...sucks.

Reply Jake E. Fisher, July 15th, 2010, 11:04 pm

keep the old one.If you change again I will kill you.):<

Reply Zephyr_the_misfit_king, July 16th, 2010, 12:28 am

They're so different, just make it have 2 heads

Reply SR (lazy) (Guest), July 16th, 2010, 6:32 am

Clusterfuck.

Reply FlyingMonkey, July 16th, 2010, 9:30 am

Head two.
But to be completely honest it's hardly a decent sprite. Your shading is sloppy and random. So sloppy on fact that I cant tell the difference in his hair spikes. Your sprite is also lacking contrast. The shading is almost non-existent, and the hue's which you chose are awful. The anatomy is off by quite a lot, as well as your sprites arms. I think you have also recycled the cliche of "emo-hog" that is not only prosaic but also annoying.

The reason I believe that your shading is all messed up is because you tried to many shades. Instead of using about five shades for such a small area, choose about three well contrasted shades. This will make your sprite look much cleaner and less sloppy. Look at any sprite, learn how the use of less shades (along with contrast and hue.) can improve your sprite. And when I say that your anatomy is off I am for the most part pointing to the arm, hand, and legs of the sprite. If your character were real I doubt his body would be that out of proportion.

If I were you I'd scrap this sprite and start over. I'd learn more about shades and colors before I attempt it again. And if you insist on making a hedgehog like character then take a closer look at the anatomy of said character.

P.S. Forgive me for sounding harsh. I am trying only to give you constructive criticism.

Reply Mist the Moonhunter, July 16th, 2010, 6:36 pm

^ Fm just wrote my words pretty much.

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