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Kuro Revamp

August 9th, 2010, 8:22 pm

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Reply WolfieBoy, August 9th, 2010, 8:33 pm

Sexeh Spectato Jake Says... Sorry Aero, but this takes fail to the max.
Jk, but it really does suck kinda. Preportions suck.Hair is kinda messed up now.
its just no.
I say, Kuro should take(this is from last comic) Right's quills onto lefts, and keep the normal quills and headband ect.

Reply Blitzn'Burst, August 9th, 2010, 8:34 pm

I'm sorry jake but please shutup until you learn to critique well .-. i say its fine

Reply Jake E. Fisher, August 9th, 2010, 8:38 pm

Hi I'm other Jake I like :D

Reply Mix, August 9th, 2010, 8:56 pm

Lucky boy that Kuro is.

Reply WolfieBoy, August 9th, 2010, 8:58 pm

Oh blitz. Stfu ._.
i do critique well, we have different opinions stupid.
The freaking sprite doesn't look right at all, so stfu for you get slapped cause im right behind you .3.
Also kuro i went and made something sucky for you.
good n/n

Reply KK Awesomesauce, August 9th, 2010, 9:16 pm

Clothes rock, head is okay.

Reply Mix, August 9th, 2010, 9:17 pm



Reply -Aero-, August 9th, 2010, 9:25 pm

@everyone: Just ignore him.

Reply KK Awesomesauce, August 9th, 2010, 9:27 pm

You forgot to say Spectator Aero says

Reply Pingas260XL, August 9th, 2010, 9:55 pm

hi guys, probably not all of you will care, but im back after a month hiatus. i'll post some stuuf, most of it part of my 8 bit Rockman Generic Base Project. c u guys soon.

Reply Harrow, August 9th, 2010, 10:51 pm

"i do critique well" -wolf face
Never say that. Ever. You're going to get proven wrong.

Reply Dance_Commander_Trent, August 9th, 2010, 11:03 pm

I critique well


no really

Reply Dance_Commander_Trent, August 9th, 2010, 11:09 pm

Also shading needs a giant fix, there are some points where it looks almost flat.

Head outline- use more than one shade for this, shade the sprite first, then use the third darkest shade where the lightest shade touches the edge, the second darkest shade where the second lightest touches the edge, and use the darkest where the third lightest touches the edge.

Eyes could use 2 shades to make them look more realistic, darkest on top and lightest on the bottom.

Shirt zipper looks off, maybe remove the 3rd pixel up on the right.

Arm shading could be better, see the head shading for how.

Pants need the same thing as the head, and the pants need more contrast to make the creases stand out more.

Also shoes are a bit bland.

Finally, the red is a little vibrant for my personal tastes.


Reply Mist the Moonhunter, August 10th, 2010, 4:02 am

Much worse then kuros I think.

Reply Mist the Moonhunter, August 10th, 2010, 4:03 am

Jake I agree with blitz.
I've gotta be honest, looks a little bit like you stole kuros sprites.
And then edited it minorly.

Reply -Aero-, August 10th, 2010, 8:13 am

@Everyone: I could have done better, but it ain't my sprite, I just tried to help, if you guys are so good, why don't you try it?

Reply WolfieBoy, August 10th, 2010, 4:06 pm

Why is everyone being so mean ._.
I was just kidding when i said fail.
I just don't like it. .-.
Joo gaiz r t menestz

Reply Unknown error (Guest), August 11th, 2010, 1:53 am

lrn2shade b4 u caaan crititiqueize

Reply Khuroda, August 11th, 2010, 2:10 pm

Ohey thanks man!

I'll definatly use this when I do my redesign soon :D

I do quite like some changes you've made to the head. Mostly the part to the right of his eyes.
Although the sprite looks fat :X

ohgod what the hell is that
no offense bro, but i almost threw up
oh wiat im sick

Reply Guest, August 11th, 2010, 5:55 pm

Kuro stfu my sprite is 100x better than j00rs fgt.

Reply neuroeroticEmpathy, August 12th, 2010, 9:25 am


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